Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Metaphor- nasty little insect

My brother is a fly
buzzing round you always annoying
when you get angry he zips away
he comes back for more the next day
buzzing here, buzzing there
you say "GO AWAY!" but he doesn't listen
he is always looking for someone to annoy
we say "go away!" but never will he listen to poor,poor us!

Simile- The Ants

Ants are as:
As smart as dolphins because of the way they communicate.
As fierce as dragons because they will defend their nest.
As intersting as a squid because of the way it solves problems.
As small as a pea.
As strong as a giant because it csn lift 3 times it's own weight.

Thursday, August 6, 2009

Limerick- Soviets

There was aboy from Moscow
Who would always travel to Glasgow
His friend said with a muffin
"Stop the Russian!"
But he just went back to heathrow

Pun

"And here is the person who performed that life saving operation... Dr.Reedaldabooks!"

Brocks Memory- Hiaku

Zooming round the track
the rush of adreniline
Yes!Pole position!

Wednesday, August 5, 2009

My WWII Free Verse Poem


Free Verse Poem
The Raid
At the crack of dawn the alarm rings,
Not a single bird sings.
It’s been eleven hours since our last raid.
I wonder if our time is up.
Is this the last day of our lives?
Soon after I hear the drone of the airplane engines.
The low drone of the plane is nothing new.
No. there is something new.
It’s somehow different not quite what I’ve heard before.
Is it a Heinkel or Messerschmitt?
It might be a new model
What has the German Reich got its hands on this time?
We hear the first bomb drop,
More howling then the ear-splitting explosion as it landed on a house.
We sit there in our shelter for what seemed like days, when the blasts suddenly stopped.
We clamber out and look around; we see our house in ruins.
We look for dad; he is nowhere to be found.
I doubt we will ever see him again.